WoC - Chapter 1 - 07 -WiP-

I wonder if anyone noticed the character hiding up above in the last few pages. I though I made it fairly obvious, but no one has said anything.

But this, my friends, is the first page drawn in an extended hiatus. The characters are drawn better, methinks. I realized that the lack of detail in this cave is probably disappointing. I will attempt to remedy that in future pages. I just don't want to go back and fix anything right now--I know if I do that I'll end up obsessing over details and I'll slow progress on this to a stop. My focus right now is to just move forward with the story and start developing it.

Also, text bubbles are better.

DIALOGUE:

Shadowed character: Why are you here? We have nothing to steal.

Boy: I'm not stealing anything! I'm just looking for shelter from the rain--Honest!

Shadowed character: Then why are you out this far?

NOTE: This is just a conceptual sketch stage. None of this is polished work. In all likelihood, I will eventually redraw this from the beginning. But for now, any feedback on either the story or the art is GREATLY APPRECIATED.